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He steps from the darkness
Alive with broken dreams
The hope he has is worthless
But it's all he has it seems

She sits in lighted shadows
Dreaming of being alive
Her desparation grows
Waiting for love to arrive

He takes her into his arms
A thousand words are said
Falling victims to his charms
Her hungery heart is fed

He pours his heart upon her
He holds not one thing back
Her defenses buckle under
The force of passions attack

A thousand years or so it seems
They wage the war within
Not knowing what victory will mean
But they fiercely fight to win

The flag of truce flies high
As they lay, their energy spent
Never will they understand why
Reality must reamin absent

Alive in dreams their love lives on
And they will know each other when they meet
Til then they must rest their hearts upon
These memories, loving and sweet.
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~mooology:iconmooology: Apr 5, 2008, 11:29:33 PM
nice poem =D

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~Taste-My-Scythe:iconTaste-My-Scythe: Apr 6, 2008, 6:35:08 PM
thank you

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*riencuran:iconriencuran: Apr 9, 2008, 7:12:42 PM
hm...this reminds me of something, but I don't know what :? It's going to bug me until I figure it out...

At any rate ^^ excellently written!

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~Taste-My-Scythe:iconTaste-My-Scythe: Apr 9, 2008, 8:18:48 PM
thank you :)

oh and let me know what it reminds you of when you remember

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~eskallia:iconeskallia: Apr 10, 2008, 6:12:41 PM Mood: Sweet
Very nice poem, I really liked it, very sad though., and still she awaits
~Taste-My-Scythe:iconTaste-My-Scythe: Apr 11, 2008, 12:07:17 PM
:nod: it is a little sad

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~HeartofMischief:iconHeartofMischief: 6 days 21 hours ago
I liked it!!!?????